beginning initially as an easier and fast alternative to the paper-pen version of the diary writing habit i deleoped during second year...and then turning into a junkyard wherein i dump all the trash i produce in forms of poetries (i cudn find another word that cud describe it more precisely), articles, edited photographs (even unedited ones many-a-times) and sometimes even tools-of-mass-torture...afterwards also there have been many days that somehow tried to squeeze their way into my blog but the gatekeeper kept them all away...then whats so special in 22/02/07 that i am honouring it with an opening slot on my blog (till i dont post something else, which might happen sometime real soon)...the answer might surprise you, but it is dont know!
i just felt like posting and thats exactly that i am doing right now...to think of the day that just faded away in the timeline, a very interesting observation is made....it began with me talking to some girl and ended up talking to another....and somewhere in the closing lines, the theme was somewhat similar as well....[:D]]...and no it wasn me hitting on them...the day saw me in all states today...barely able to open my eyes yet searching for an address in my chatlogs...dint get it...damn!...fone call...got the address....then a quick freshening up...trip to the courier guy to order the delivery and then began the big project...that saw me having those brainstorming sessions with the mechanic over the way i wanted my thing done...and finally gettig back to my room 5 hrs later holding my project prototype up high like a trophy!!!
soon, another trip to the IIT gate was lined up and this time for my regular grocery supplies...two foster's beers...all said and drunk, just out of the blue i get a call from a frnd of mine...and i had no idea the call is gonna see a conversation lasting three hours and me switching between three phones...and now comes the interesting part about the conversation :
- "what would a girl see in you to be attracted towards you?" - i couldnt agree any less!
- "tum pagal ho...i kno i've been using just this word over and over again but tum seriously pagal ho...." - duh!...tell me something i dont know about....
- "you are not sparky.." - for lesser mortals like myself, this supposedly legitimate term is used to describe people jinko dekhkar opposite sex ka dil "dhak dhak karne laga" gaa uthe...(remember the madhuri dixit song)...ohh...and yeah, it had started here...
- "tum boyfriend material nahi ho.." - okay...for those of you who still dint get what started at the last stop...OUCH!!!
- "i mean....u can be a good friend...but u can never be a good boyfriend.." - somebody please ome and make this lady stop...why is she so adamant on makin me feel miserable...and i did say "okay,that did hurt a bit..." [:p]
and yeah, the account of my day did miss a very important part of it...one of my friends X told his friend Y that his girl(Y's) had ....or chuck it...it will get too complicated...
and yeah...if some reader was kind enough to go through all this crap i just vomited out in this post.ThaNk YOu!!! [:D]
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[heading] IT WAS SHIT [/heading]
like the kinda guy i am...jus after i was done wid the post,i looked around for someone i cud make read the post and take a frst hand review...now at 4 in the morning twas kinda hard to find anyone around...so found vivek online and asked him to read....he patiently went thru the long post and gave quite an interesting review...
i think the review will be best presented firsthand only...
here it comes...[:)]
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Abhishek: chal ab blog padh
done??
Vivek: just a min...
i am not skipping a line
Abhishek: okie
:)
Vivek: now what type of review you want?
Abhishek: anything will do
Vivek: as a piece of litrary work...
it was shit...
Abhishek: :))
Vivek: you were tellng the meaning ... your interpretation leavin little scope for reader
you should have told the incidences rather than interpretation..
what you have done... goes well with poetry not paragraphs...
Abhishek: hmmm
Vivek: to tell you the truth ... if you start telling interpretation ... you make the reader go crazy ...
Abhishek: hmmm
Vivek: and he feels like you are going in circles repeating same thing over ...
though you may not be.. contexts might nbe different...
so my advice is ..tell them the story...
and don't gie a damn to wither they understand it or not...
Abhishek: hmmm
Vivek: well i am telling you all this .. because I used to write diary... once long ago
and when ever I have read it .. I felt like I was a duffer writing all bulshit..
Abhishek: hmmm
Vivek: it really was ... I wrote just like you did right now..
but I liked the conversation part...
it leaves scope for reader...
about the girls...
Abhishek: :))
Vivek: I know this much..
if you give them room enough...
they think they could get a better BF
jerk 'em off once in a while ...
Abhishek: okay...to make things clearer...this girl wasn my girlfriend
Vivek: they will stay around...
doesn't matter....
I have had very long relation with girls with whom I flirt ...
Abhishek: hmmm
Vivek: and jolt them once in a while .. and whenever I have gone humble... they have started thinkin of themselves as some miss india
well chalo tumhein ek interesting kahani batata hon...
all true..
~~and here he drifted away to his storyland,thats someone's personal life...off limits!!!~~
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now this was a critic talkin to me...tellin me what all shud i do to improve upon my writing skills...and why do i post it here..
1. so that i can always read it..
2. the account was quite interesting...i mean the way he presented it...[:D]
3. told u...have to keep myself alive till 6....and still..i have nothing better to do...[:D]
--abyshake!
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happens
its a bloggers block
n as far as the diary writing bit is concerned u shud someday read mine
whenever i go thru it i laugh thinking what the spur of the moment thing had made me scribble
least i cud say bout this is its a perfect example of organised chaos
-rose
i dare to differ from vivek
~your interpretation makes thing interesting and more real. Though i agree there shud be some room for reader's thinking too.
Reading the above and also, working on the warning you gave me last night, I must tell I am pretty pleased of my life that is, for not having read your post any longer than what was supplied in the tiny little chat window.
The comments were really helpful :P
Keep writing...
and Keep warning me about the sheer deadliness of your posts :P
and if I behave a bit crazy, you might even punish me with a small sample like you did yesterday :P
But for the love of God, Mujhe mere haal par chhod do :P
@bhav(voice)
yeah...thats what i think atleast when i give those extra comments and descriptions of mine...otherwise it will be just a narration....
and abt the scope of the reader, i am still trying to work on it...and to be very frank, havn been able to understand yet where to draw the line....
-abyshake
@arya (Aab - e - chashm)
okay...first of all this hasn been the first time when someone has asked me Mujhe mere haal par chhod do....so, i am pretty immune to that now...and abt those warnings and everything, u dont have ne idea dood....the killin spree aint gonna stop...ever!
-abyshake
some people just dont change..
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