# bikhre kaanch ke tukde

bikhre kaanch ke tukde path pe
raahi chala main nange paaon
chilchilati dhoop dupahri
aankhein dhoondh rahi ek chaaon
panharin kachhi sadak pe jaati
jaane kya hai uska thaur
dhool udati chalein hawayein
woh nabh thoda dhundhlaya hai
aankhein bojhil ho jaati meri
pal pal dekho gir padta hun
dil mera de bujhti aawazein
nabj kahin jaa khoti hai
ankhiyon ke aage chhaye ik andhiyara
kaanon mein goonje meethi ik pukaar
paaon saath chhod rahe ab mera
toot si rahi hain ab yeh saansein
ik sannata sa chhaya hai
ankhiyon mein andhiyaara bharmaya hai
aankh khuli jo maine paaya
raah mein pasri,dhool mein lipti
kisi manas ki ik mrit kaaya
mukh laage kyu kuchh pahchana
kyu man mera bhar aaya hai
is veerane mein jaane
yeh jaana sa kaun aaya hai
soch raha hun main lekin
kis or mujhe ab jaana hai
O pathik,kar maarg prasast ab mera
kyu mukh tera murjhaya hai....

P.S. : full credits to this goes to charu and company....we were havin a meetin for our HSS project and me havin very less ( read nil ) to contribute finally started markin the paper when the meetin crossed three hours....
well,the lines may not be at all clear...but,couldn help it...[:p]....try bein in the position i was last night....[:D]


P.S. : well....the idea was bit different and i was unable to represent it in a nice manner....so may be i'll add in few lines here....the guy being referred to here is dying...and he finally dies....in the last four lines,it is the soul of the guy which is doing the talking....

P.S. : (The Meaning) : as i have already told,this guy is dying...now this is a representation of what i think a man will think in his last minutes...what will come to his mind...arbit thoughts...so these are arbit thoughts initially....sky,tree,the lady and all....his eyes getting closed and breaking breath and weak heartbeat,these are indicating his death coming closer....and finally he dies...."aankh khuli jab"-this onwards it is his soul doing all the talking...it is looking down at its own corpse due to which it is feeling an attachment towards it....n the soul doesn't kno where to go (coz i don kno what happens after death)...so it is asking the dead body!
(was forced to write this explanation after i had to explain this to couple of my friends....)
[:p]

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